My Holiday
In the holiday I flew with my family in an aeroplane to Tonga. We drove to the airport early in the morning. I went with my brother and sister, aunty and uncle, my papa and my mum. On the plane I played games and ate lunch. It was a long and tiring ride. I was sitting next to my little brother. When we landed, it was really hot and I was very tired. My aunty and cousin picked us up from the airport and we all went back to sleep at my cousins house.
By Xavier
I am glad you enjoyed the flight to Tonga, Xavier. I am also glad you have been able to write about it on the blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Xaiver,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained what kind of ride it was inside the aeroplane,
I also understand and remember how hot it was in Tonga because I also went to Tonga on the holiday's,
Maybe next time you can use more descriptive writing in what you wrote. Other then that I love your writing !
Hope to see you write again with the advice I have just gave you !
Hey Xaiver,
ReplyDeleteI really like what you did in Tonga and who did you go with. I also like what you did during your flight to Tonga.
I also like how you described about Tonga.
Maybe next time you can put adjectives in your writing.
Hope to see you write again with the advice I gave you.
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