MY SOUL FRIEND
This is Michael. He is a year eight student.
He likes to play games and he doesn't like people
bullying his friends. He doesn't like Chinese food and he likes Maths. He also likes to be kind.
He likes to eat foods like Mcdonalds and KFC
and also his Mum's Tongan food. He also likes to play
rugby with Tongan people .
and also his Mum's Tongan food. He also likes to play
rugby with Tongan people .
Don't forget Paula, that you are Michael's Soul Friend as well. You can help him as he is quite new to our school.
ReplyDeleteHi Paula,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you wrote about Michael stating all the little things about him. I think that your writing is very good but I also think that adding a 1 or 2 more sentences wouldn't hurt.
Mikaela
Hi Paula,
ReplyDeleteYour Soul friend looks cool I wonder what it feel like to be with him.
Hey Paula,
ReplyDeleteI like the way how you described about Micheal, he is a shy boy and he can't speak in English popularly. So I hope you can teach him some words in English so that he can learn.
Well done keep up the great work.