Thursday, November 24, 2011

Our Mystery Walk

On a nice sunny morning I got changed into my uniform filled up a bottle of cool water, got a delicious packed lunch and went to school.

After morning tea the whole class rushed to get their bags, hat, water bottle and lunch. Next we lined up sensibly outside wearing our red school hats and our bags. We had teachers and also had visitors (Mr Coakley and Miss Ana).

We then came outside and went down our school and followed Mrs Tui. Next we found out that we split up from the others and went the wrong way, so we quickly ran back the other way. Later on we went up a high hill and saw heaps of interesting trees.

After that we came to Dingle Dell Reserve Park. We went down heaps of straight steps. We saw heaps of trees. It was dark too. While we were walking Mr Hooker was busy filming and Miss Oldfield lead us to the wrong way. So we went back the other way. We all went together and then we were all amazed to see these tall green trees. We all had a nice lunch. People went on benches some people sat on the hard ground and some of the boys were playing rugby. I was going to put my rubbish in the bin when I saw a grave. It was George and Ella Robert’s grave.

Mrs Tui called us to come and walk back to school. When we got back to school I was out of breath and my chest was really sore. I had blisters on my feet and they were really sore. I was so tired and exhausted. But when I went home and I felt better.


  1. Sounds like you had a great time Eden. Thanks for sharing your experience on the blog. I really enjoyed your recount. Great to see you breaking your text up into paragraphs.

    Keep up the good writing.

    Miss G :-)