Thursday, November 13, 2014

Cross Country

On a hot sunny day it was the finals for Cross-Country so everyone had to run. The first race was for the five year old kids, when the race started they ran so fast. Fiapo ran real fast because she was coming first. 


When it was the kids under seven years turn to run they ran around the school, they finished with one lap around the court. They sped all around the court, while they were running around the kids under 8 years old were getting ready. It was my turn to run.

Everyone was watching us as we were getting ready to run. When it was time to run I ran as fast as I and I was coming first. When Macky caught up to me I slowed down because I knew I couldn't beat him. When we nearly reached the school gates I ran as fast as I could. I went through the school gates and slowed down, I could hear my mum cheering for me and my friends. My mum was yelling "hurry up and run" so I ran faster and faster. I ended up coming first. I was very tired at the end and I was huffing and puffing.
I was very happy that I came first.


2 comments:

  1. Wow Vanessa you have done an awesome piece of writing next time you might want to add more commas ok by the way well done in cross country

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  2. Wow Vanessa you have done an awesome piece of writing next time you might want to add more commas ok by the way well done in cross country

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