Today i want to tell you that you are the best mum I’ve ever seen you are a beautiful lady.I also want to tell you that i love you because you always take me where i like to go. I really love you and will always love you.
I want to thank you for taking me places and buying me
wonderful clothes and for buying me delicious food. Thank you for buying me shoes.
I really enjoy the times when we always went to red rat and when we went on trains. I also really enjoyed that day on my birthday. I really enjoyed it on the twins birthday as well.
I would like to travel around the world with you and take you where you would like to go. I would also like to take you to get a new car.
Great writing, Lili.
ReplyDeleteGood job Lili. I like the way you said thank you to your mum for everything she has done for you. I like the way you used fullstops instead of commas. I think you need to work on changing your lower case "i" into an upper case "I".
ReplyDeleteHi Lili,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a Mothers Day writing for your mother.
I wrote one for my mother as well.
Please check your capital letters.
Keep up with the fantastic work.
hi Lily
ReplyDeleteI like how you made your Mother day writing for your mother but I like how you are going with your mother and buying shoes and clothes and how you say to your mother that you like your mother very much.