Etuale's Olympic Writing

Italy 1892 02 August

The Big Ben clock with The Gold medal

These are the people that are going to London.

Kando, Bhutto, Shane, McMahon, Forna, Shorn, Fan, Pan and Kando. Bhutto was going to London for the Olympics, today he was participating in the running for the Olympics. Shane, Mcmahon, Forna, Shorn and Fan. Pan was the people who’s gonna watch the olympics in 1892 we drove past and looked at the Big Ben.  

At the Olympics, but the Big Ben broke because of the

Workers did something wrong. But the clock just stopped working because Kando. Bhutto was just looking at the gold medal but the workers started to do a big splash but I didn't know what was the splash  was super big. That the gold medal dropped in the clock machine of Big Ben. So the workers pulled the gold medal out and Big Ben started working. Then everyone started to clap and shouted ‘hooray!’ So that's when the olympics started here on 1892 02 August.

Christpoher's Olympic Narrative

On the  1st of July I went to Brazil. I went to Rio De Janeiro so I can go join the olympics.

At the stadium “I saw a lot of people” they were “cheering” already. The stadium was humongous.

I went to the place where you write what you compete it is called check in. I said “I want to compete in the 1000m run.” But I didn’t know what to do?

I said “I am representing Tonga. I was representing Tonga because they haven’t got a medal.”

Everyone was cheering loud because they saw Usain Bolt. I said “I cannot compete with Usain Bolt he is too quick.”

Then out of nowhere when I was practising my coach shot me with a bow and arrow and destroyed my Iphone 7. So I couldn’t call the ambulance.

The ambulance had to come from the hospital because there was blood dripping. But there was an ambulance near by so they came and helped their favourite athlete.

Then there was lighting so it was canceled and I was all better so I went and got my gold medal. But then the next day I competed for the 1000m sprint. I was versusing Opeti, Palu and Diego. I could not beat Opeti, but I can get in a tie with Palu, but I can beat Diego.

My manager shot me and there was thunder so it canceled for tomorrow. I was all better and I had a tie with Opeti. So Opeti and I came first and Palu was second and Diego was third.