Monday, May 31, 2010

I Am/Poem

First Stanza
I am young and smart.
I wonder if I will get a really good job when I’m older.
I hear people say my name.
I see my grandpa’s face in the sky.
I want to be an All Black prop.
I am young and smart.

Second Stanza
I pretend to be dumb but I can do it.
I feel smarter than last year.
I touch my own belongings.
I worry that I will die early.
I cry if somebody dies in my family.

Third Stanza
I understand what people tell me.
I say I love my whole family and God.
I dream about nothing.
I try to get a good report in school.
I hope my family loves me.
I am smart.

4 comments:

  1. What a wonderful poem Enasi, you have captured some real thoughts here.

    Keep up the great writing.

    Miss G :-)

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  2. Nice Poem Eneasi.

    It was awesom.

    Salamona :D

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  3. Hi Asi, you did an excellent work, well done and keep up the good work.

    Silia

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  4. This is the greatest piece of poetry i've ever come across, Asi. Well done. I AM so proud of you.

    Your Dad,

    Nasili

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