We are Year 2 and 3 learners at Saint Pius X School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Mr Gaffney.
Nice holiday Room 5 I love your story it nice. Your story is wonderful I love the Gold-Rush it nice. Next time make sure you have different starts every time.
You must have been very happy that you went on all the rides, next time you may want to put a bigger story to make it more interesting but good work keep it up.