Thursday, August 9, 2012


On the holidays I went to Rainbows End it was cool and fun. I went on all the rides. My favourite rides were the Go-Carts, Gold-Rush, Roller-Coaster and the Bumper-Cars. We went home. I was tired and slept during the car ride.  


  1. Nice holiday Room 5 I love your story it nice. Your story is wonderful I love the Gold-Rush it nice. Next time make sure you have different starts every time.

  2. You must have been very happy that you went on all the rides, next time you may want to put a bigger story to make it more interesting but good work keep it up.