Friday, May 20, 2016

Mother's Day

Mother's Day

On  Sunday it  was  Mother's day.  For Mother's day we  eat  a  pig  and  takeaway  and  all  kind  of   Tongan  food.  After eating  we   went  to  play  on  the  park  and to  play  touch  on  the  field.   I  scored   ten  goals    then  we  had  to  go  inside  the  house.  We  had  to  watch  t.v  and  wait  for the  food   and  everyone  went  back  home to get ready for   school

3 comments:

  1. I am glad you enjoyed Mother's Day and you made your mother feel special.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Sefoplau,
    I like how you said you had pig and takeaways because that reminded me of what we had for mothers day.
    I think it is helpful for you to say we ate pork and takeaways and Tongan food too.I think it might be helpful for you to use punctuation and when you finish writing read it to make sure your writing make scene.


    I

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hi Sefoplau,
    I like how you said you had pig and takeaways because that reminded me of what we had for mothers day.
    I think it is helpful for you to say we ate pork and takeaways and Tongan food too.I think it might be helpful for you to use punctuation and when you finish writing read it to make sure your writing make scene.


    I

    ReplyDelete