Saturday, May 21, 2016

My Wonderful Holiday

On Tuesday my family went to Sylvia Park to watch a movie it was called Inside Out. My mum and I went to buy the snacks. We all wanted popcorn, frozen coke and lollies. After buying the food we went to the waiting area. We had to wait for the other movies to finish first. When the other movie finished we went in to the cinema. The movie was about the little people inside a little girl's head. The little people control her body. I fell asleep during the movie. When the movie was finished we went home. When I got home I went straight to bed.


  1. What a shame you fell asleep, Akesa. The little people inside your head must have been too tired to keep you awake. Nice writing.

  2. Hi Akesa,
    That was great writing.
    KEep it up.d