We are Year 4 and 5 learners at Saint Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. We are in an innovative learning space. Our teacher is Mr Gaffney.
Well done Samiu, that is a wonderful poem. Your vocabulary really enhances your writing. Keep up the great writing. I'm looking forward to seeing your next post!
Kia ora Samiu, I enjoyed listening to your poem. The graphics really brought it to life. I think it would sound great as a song. If you ever add music to it, please publish that also :) Mrs Burt
Well done Samiu, that is a wonderful poem. Your vocabulary really enhances your writing. Keep up the great writing. I'm looking forward to seeing your next post!
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Kia ora Samiu, I enjoyed listening to your poem. The graphics really brought it to life. I think it would sound great as a song. If you ever add music to it, please publish that also :) Mrs Burt
ReplyDeleteWow Samiu! What a great poem. I can't wait to see your next poem. Well done. Mrs Meredith
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