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Saturday, May 9, 2015

My Wonderful Holiday

On Tuesday my brother , sister and I wen to the park. When we got to the park we played a game of basketball. It was tiring and fun. The next day my mum drove us to the swimming pools in Panmure. I was happy and excited because I was going on the big slide. I waited in line to go down the slide. When I went down the slide it was very dark and scary. On Christmas my family and I went to my Nana's place. When we got there we had delicious Chicken and Jelly to eat.

3 comments:

  1. Great writing Jerome. I enjoyed reading your piece of writing. Next time maybe you can check your work with someone before posting. Other then that great work Jerome.

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  2. Good Writing Myself

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  3. Good Writing Myself

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