Thursday, July 7, 2016

Ripper Rugby

On Tuesday we went to the hall for ripper rugby.Our coach was hamish. Hamish told us if only three boys could come up.Then Hamish told us our groups to go to.

After Hamish told us to go to our groups we got a ball each but Hamish gave it to the leaders in each group. When he told us our groups he told us to run with the ball all the way to the first cone but some of the room 3 kids ran to the last cone. After that part he told us to run and throw the rugby ball in the air and then catch it and keep on running and do the same thing.

8 comments:

  1. Nice writing, Silia. Make sure to read your story very carefully to fix mistakes when you finish.

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  5. Hi Silia,
    I loved how you described to the readers how to play ripper rugby. Just make sure you read your story to check for your punctuation before posting it online.
    Good Job.

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  6. Wow Silia that was awesome.
    Remember to check your writing every time.
    Last of all keep that writing up.

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  7. I really liked the way you described what you did. Just remember to check your writing and if you got your full stops and capital letters in the right place

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  8. Hi Silia,
    I like how you introduced your writing. I could connect with what you did because I like playing Ripper Rugby. Make sure you check your sentences and spaces between each one. Great Job!

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