My Holidays
In the Holidays me, my family and I went to the pools. I got my clothes and I was ready to go to the pools . I also went to get some food so I could eat lunch at the pools too.
When my mum came back from work my family and l walked into the pools. I was eating on the way in. When we got there my cousins were there .
I went to get my clothes in my sisters bag so I can get changed, I got changed in the girls changing room . When got changed I went into the pools and it was so so cool.I was sad because it was raining so I went inside and I was waiting when the rain stop.
I went to get changed and then me and my family went to my cousins house, we were eating watching TV at the same time . I was with my big sister, my other sister and my cousin. We were laughing for ages because the movies was so funny. When it was dark me and my family went back to my house and went to sleep.
By Monique
Hi Monique. What a great time you had at swimming. It is a pity you got wet when it rained. Sometimes I like swimming in the rain.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Monique,
ReplyDeleteI love how you describe your holiday and put your writing in paragraphs. I hope you had fun at the pools.
Keep it up,
Silia
Hi Monique It me nasili that is really good work keep it up i hope you get better at it Monique. you should Publish more work
ReplyDeleteHi Monique,
ReplyDeleteI loved how you made an effort to do this writing. Please describe more about your experience about you in the pools.
Love the work Monique,
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